Carrotglace has no idea how to end a story. Every single one of his stories just seems to ramble on and on with no end in sight. The plot eventually becomes "I just watched Star Wars! I'll add a Star Wars ripoff! I just watched Men In Black! I'll do that, too!" or variations on the same.
This is fun and exciting at first. The story has a freshness and enthusiasm to it for the first couple of chapters. Eventually it gets bogged down with too much baggage.
Frankly, I'm more interested when I see that he's started a new story then continuing an old one.
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Epsilon
There are some exceptions to the above, of course.
This is fun and exciting at first. The story has a freshness and enthusiasm to it for the first couple of chapters. Eventually it gets bogged down with too much baggage.
Frankly, I'm more interested when I see that he's started a new story then continuing an old one.
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Epsilon
There are some exceptions to the above, of course.