Squee! My love for the fact that there is a new chapter out is only exceeded by my now renewed desire for "Moar!".
Wonderful job building up to a cliffhanger.
As for the polykev issue:
I don't think it was explicitly mentioned what was magical and what was tech based about it, if distinction between the two can be made on such a synergistic product.-Terry
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"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away." - Antoine de Saint Exupery
"Luge strategy? Lie flat and try not to die." - Carmen Boyle (Olympic Luge Gold Medal winner - 1996)
Mary Sue's theme music
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy
Wonderful job building up to a cliffhanger.
As for the polykev issue:
I don't think it was explicitly mentioned what was magical and what was tech based about it, if distinction between the two can be made on such a synergistic product.-Terry
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"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away." - Antoine de Saint Exupery
"Luge strategy? Lie flat and try not to die." - Carmen Boyle (Olympic Luge Gold Medal winner - 1996)
Mary Sue's theme music
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy