Dead Bang chapter 3 up

[Dragonflight]

Only up to about 10K right now. And it still reads a little weak, I think. It's the flaw of descriptive combat. There's not as much dialogue, which means there's the risk it becomes page after page of descriptions, with no character interaction. Still needs a little tightening up, I think.
Nowhere near finished the combat. Just got things humming.
Dragonflight
---
Those who fear the darkness have never seen what the light can do.