I can't really do much for a continuity check, but I can proofread. I've been a professional proofreader for a decade (but only for a major publisher of free coupon booklets) and have Bachelor degrees in English Literature and Communications.
If you want to contact me you can reach me at:
essex at cfl dot rr dot com
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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
If you want to contact me you can reach me at:
essex at cfl dot rr dot com
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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV