Quote:The problem is that for this to work I have to be interested in finding out the explanations you are dangling in front of me. I'm not, really.
It's all part of the plan. Relax. Wait a bit.
You spend the time to introduce every other character in the story properly. The fact that you don't bother doing so for someone who is so close to a major character, especially when it is quite obviously someone I could be more familiar with if I read different source material, is frankly annoying.
It makes me actively disinterested in the character and, by extension, any plot she is involved with.
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