My principal criticism is, well, I've noticed this in your other works as well, is that, using the appropriate food metaphor, you tend to serve canapes than full course meals.
Yes, they're delicious and you can eat them all night long - but they can leave you kind of hanging.
I dunno, just my preference I think. It's a very good piece of work but it teases a lot but I want "moar" as they say.
A more flesh on the bones, a little more tight focus shots and not the panning shots feel that I get from the writing, I think would add a lot to it.
Yes, they're delicious and you can eat them all night long - but they can leave you kind of hanging.
I dunno, just my preference I think. It's a very good piece of work but it teases a lot but I want "moar" as they say.
A more flesh on the bones, a little more tight focus shots and not the panning shots feel that I get from the writing, I think would add a lot to it.