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[Bleach]Stray Cat Strut
Re: chapter 5
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It's not exactly a bad thing.
Here's a better analogy: a chair is pretty functional with four legs and platform. It's functional and beautiful in simplicity but that's not the be-all and end-all of chairs.
Griever does pretty good work with drawing general framework and manages to get some fanciful woodwork on their, but it's not comfy for me. It's the poking in my back when I try to relax on the back rest the hard flatness against my butt. Some people don't mind that and some people do.
It works and is perfectly good, but I would like to have a few gentle touches here and there for comfort.
And hey, Acyl, you have a different style - I've read the Waterfall ninja fic and it's got the thing I'm looking for; it has the tight focus which I prefer.
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[Bleach]Stray Cat Strut - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:19 PM
chapter 2 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:20 PM
chapter 3-1 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:23 PM
chapter 3-2 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:26 PM
chapter 3-3 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:28 PM
chapter 4 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:29 PM
chapter 5 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 01:32 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by VladimirTherin - 07-26-2007, 05:48 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by Acyl - 07-26-2007, 06:09 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 06:33 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by WengFook - 07-26-2007, 08:47 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by Epsilon - 07-26-2007, 08:57 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by Rieverre - 07-26-2007, 09:27 PM
[No subject] - by katreus - 07-26-2007, 11:48 PM
Re: chapter 5 - by Epsilon - 07-27-2007, 12:48 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by Rieverre - 07-27-2007, 01:00 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by VladimirTherin - 07-27-2007, 05:06 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by Elsa Bibat - 07-27-2007, 05:20 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by happerry - 07-27-2007, 05:36 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by Acyl - 07-27-2007, 08:35 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by Elsa Bibat - 07-27-2007, 09:46 AM
Re: chapter 5 - by Rieverre - 07-27-2007, 01:01 PM
Re: . - by Jeap - 07-28-2007, 04:44 AM
re:re:chapter 5 - by ordnance11 - 07-28-2007, 07:26 PM
Re: re:re:chapter 5 - by ECSNorway - 07-28-2007, 11:41 PM
Re: re:re:chapter 5 - by ECSNorway - 07-31-2007, 07:20 AM
Re: re:re:chapter 5 - by Rieverre - 07-31-2007, 02:07 PM
Re: re:re:chapter 5 - by ECSNorway - 07-31-2007, 06:17 PM
Lovin' it. - by SkyeFire - 08-01-2007, 04:17 AM
Re: Lovin' it. - by ECSNorway - 08-01-2007, 06:16 AM
Re: Lovin' it. - by Rieverre - 08-01-2007, 11:23 AM
Re: Re: Lovin' it - by SkyeFire - 08-02-2007, 04:07 AM
Re: Re: Lovin' it - by Epsilon - 08-02-2007, 05:56 AM
Re: Re: Lovin' it - by Deadpan29 - 08-03-2007, 11:07 PM
Re: Re: Lovin' it - by ECSNorway - 08-07-2007, 06:44 AM
Re: Re: Lovin' it - by Rieverre - 08-07-2007, 06:16 PM

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