Quote:Would it help if I said that the first arc is just the entree here?
My principal criticism is, well, I've noticed this in your other works as well, is that, using the appropriate food metaphor, you tend to serve canapes than full course meals.
But seriously, yeah, that is sort of my style ... I couldn't honestly tell you why, or even begin to guess at the reason myself. It isn't like I'm all that aware of it most of the time, which is no excuse at all, I know, but there you go.
That said, both Fosfor any myself realized somewhere in the production cycle that, if we didn't do it this way for Home Ground, it'd have ended up being a lot bigger and more unwieldy that it is now.
Or, wait ... I sort of know why I may tend towards this sort of thing in my writings. It sort of has to do with Early-Stone-Age-Griever-Writings which used to involve many, many instances of Exposition Fu Of Doom.
They were fugly.
In an effort to _not_ sink into going Basil at ever available plot point and explaining it to death in a long and boring sequence of run-on-sentences, sort of like I'm doing right here and now, I made the effort to compact my style.
Quote:I'd like to think we'll deliver on that.
I dunno, just my preference I think. It's a very good piece of work but it teases a lot but I want "moar" as they say.
Thanks for the C&C, Elsa.
-Griever
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm