Does the writer on board stuff ever stop?  I had to stop reading Brave New World around Ch7 because it was driving me nuts.  There's also a debilitating amount of tellnotshowitis when Harry get's to America.  It's like the guy forgot how to write.  Does this get better?  I hope so, because he's got some interesting ideas and I'd like to see where he goes with it.   But seriously!   Goo!---------------
-Jon
Leo (July 23-Aug. 22)
The population density of Wyoming is very low, but that doesn't mean the people there aren't also out to kill you.
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
	
	
	
-Jon
Leo (July 23-Aug. 22)
The population density of Wyoming is very low, but that doesn't mean the people there aren't also out to kill you.
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
