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FATE/Twilight Flicker: Split Daybreak OMAKE files
congrats, then
#93
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It occurs to me that we probably hit our first chapter break somewhere during all this. You want I should try and edit it up and post it as a seperate thread, say, as 'FATE/ Change Dusk'?
That'd probably be for the best, yes.

"There's something wrong here."
"Master," a chiding voice. "You're heading into a free for all, no holds barred deathmatch for one of the most sought after items of lore and legend ... One would think that 'wrong' is sort of par for the course here."
The woman tugged on the lapels of her suit's jacket, but otherwise didn't show any signs of having heard.
Possibly something to do with the fact that talking to thin air wasn't something to be done in the middle of a small crowd.
It wasn't even the situation she'd run into on what she'd intended to be a brief reconnaissance of the more modern part of Fuyuki.
She was ... perturbed. Perturbed enough to almost not notice the sudden rain of debris coming down around a dozen or so feet away.
Reflex and excellent visual acuity had her spotting the darting shadow that first dove into, and then again out of the cloud of pulverized plaster and glass shards where something had slammed into the wall of the highrise a dozen or so floor up.
"Master? Would you like me to pursue?"
Yes, her Servant had caught it as well, plus the fact that it was apparently another Eirei doing the grasshopper imitation up there.
Bazette Fraga MacRemitz shook her head.
Whatever was going on up there, it didn't look like something it was wise to just leap into, as much confidence as she had in her Servants skills with those blades of hers.
Normally, she wouldn't have cared and would have gone for it, but the earlier conversation with somebody she'd thought to be impartial in this ...
... she'd never been friends with Kotomine Kiriei. She didn't think the man had any friends, truth be told. But she'd been fairly sure that she knew what to expect from the man. She'd met him before after all, and liked to think she was well acquainted with him.
While the exchange of pleasantries they'd engaged in upon her visiting his Church a few hours ago hadn't been out of the ordinary for them, her instincts had been constantly on edge since just before stepping into what was supposed to be neutral ground.
Instead, the Church and Kotomine himself had seemed ... vaguely forboding.
She'd always trusted her instincts.
Which left her about as close to jumping at shadows as she'd ever been.
Not the best state of mind to enter combat in.
"Judging from the weapon, a Lancer," she heard the petite Archer state from beside her. "I couldn't see who he was fighting, though."
"Could you track him?" she whispered.
Archer's 'hmph' of offended dignity was as much of an answer as she needed.
"There was something familiar about him ... no, nevermind," the white-haired, red-coated Servant said, her face briefly creased by a frown.
"Follow him, but keep your distance. Use those eyes of yours to your advantage."
"My Master," the girlish figure tensed, then leapt, still immaterial to any but those sensitive enough to the supernatural.

offhand suggestion: so, did Medea in this one summon Archer - Emiya, since Kojiro isn't in the running for that spot?
-Griever
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm
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Pretty good April 1st - by ordnance11 - 04-01-2006, 06:56 PM
once more, with feeling - by Rieverre - 04-01-2006, 10:06 PM
the obligatory one ... - by Rieverre - 04-02-2006, 08:48 PM
Re: the obligatory one ... - by Valles - 04-02-2006, 09:29 PM
Re: the obligatory one ... - by ordnance11 - 04-02-2006, 09:53 PM
Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by Guest - 04-03-2006, 01:24 AM
re:Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by ordnance11 - 04-03-2006, 01:58 AM
Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by Rieverre - 04-04-2006, 04:41 AM
Re: Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by WengFook - 04-04-2006, 05:03 AM
Re: Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by ClassicDrogn - 04-04-2006, 05:08 AM
Holy what? - by ordnance11 - 04-04-2006, 06:13 AM
Holy what? - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 12:12 AM
Meiun/Zairyuu Mayonaka - by Valles - 04-05-2006, 12:31 AM
tsk, giving me ideas - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 01:31 AM
re:tsk, giving me ideas - by ordnance11 - 04-05-2006, 03:11 AM
actually - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 03:34 AM
Re: actually - by WengFook - 04-05-2006, 04:01 AM
um ... no - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 04:11 AM
A pitchfork!! - by ordnance11 - 04-05-2006, 04:40 AM
*snicker* - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 04:43 AM
Re: *snicker* - by WengFook - 04-05-2006, 05:43 AM
Re: *snicker* - by ClassicDrogn - 04-06-2006, 01:21 AM
a sage and advisor - by Rieverre - 04-06-2006, 01:59 PM
RE a sage and advisor - by ordnance11 - 04-07-2006, 04:16 AM
humm - by Rieverre - 04-07-2006, 11:25 AM
Re:hummm - by ordnance11 - 04-08-2006, 02:47 AM
the _other_ obligatory Flicker - by Rieverre - 04-10-2006, 12:18 AM
re:the _other_ obligatory Flicker - by ordnance11 - 04-10-2006, 03:56 AM
Tsukihime - by ordnance11 - 04-10-2006, 07:07 AM
Shinji's treatment of Sakura - by ordnance11 - 04-10-2006, 07:16 AM
*dies laughing* - by Rieverre - 04-10-2006, 11:57 PM
Re: *dies laughing* - by ClassicDrogn - 04-11-2006, 01:35 AM
re: *dies laughing* - by ordnance11 - 04-12-2006, 06:34 AM
I know this guy from somewhere - by Rieverre - 04-12-2006, 08:36 PM
appendix to #7 - by Rieverre - 04-16-2006, 09:11 PM
re:appendix to #7 - by ordnance11 - 04-16-2006, 09:50 PM
Re: re:appendix to #7 - by WengFook - 04-17-2006, 03:35 AM
oh dear... - by katreus - 04-17-2006, 04:49 AM
One little victory - by Valles - 04-17-2006, 08:36 AM
Re: One little victory - by katreus - 04-17-2006, 09:49 AM
Re: One little victory - by Valles - 04-17-2006, 10:06 AM
Meeting - by Valles - 04-21-2006, 10:09 AM
I am the Captain of My Soul - by Rieverre - 04-21-2006, 03:10 PM
just thought of this one - by Rieverre - 04-21-2006, 03:45 PM
Sword Dancer? - by Valles - 04-22-2006, 03:41 AM
Re: Sword Dancer? - by WengFook - 04-22-2006, 04:15 AM
Re: Sword Dancer? - by Valles - 04-22-2006, 04:27 AM
For the Assasins - by ordnance11 - 04-22-2006, 05:05 AM
Re: For the Assasins - by Valles - 04-22-2006, 05:23 AM
Re: re:For the Assasins - by ordnance11 - 04-22-2006, 06:02 AM
Re: re:For the Assasins - by katreus - 04-22-2006, 06:14 AM
Throwing my omake into the ring - by ordnance11 - 04-22-2006, 08:26 AM
Minor Editsu - by Rieverre - 04-22-2006, 06:51 PM
Talking - by Valles - 04-23-2006, 01:43 AM
*evil chuckle* - by Rieverre - 04-23-2006, 03:06 AM
*VEG* - by Valles - 04-24-2006, 03:46 AM
Re: *VEG* - by katreus - 04-24-2006, 05:57 AM
birds of a feather? - by Rieverre - 04-24-2006, 11:07 AM
*preens* - by Valles - 04-24-2006, 03:11 PM
speaking of whom - by Rieverre - 04-24-2006, 04:15 PM
Who? - by Valles - 04-24-2006, 09:52 PM
Re: Who? - by katreus - 04-24-2006, 11:32 PM
Re: Who? - by WengFook - 04-25-2006, 04:16 AM
Re: Who? - by Valles - 04-25-2006, 04:32 AM
Re: Who? - by WengFook - 04-25-2006, 08:45 AM
...then dealing with them - by Valles - 04-26-2006, 01:03 AM
Thing for her... - by ordnance11 - 04-26-2006, 03:18 AM
Re: Lancer II's Situation - by DKnight54 - 04-26-2006, 03:42 AM
Versus check and mate - by Valles - 04-26-2006, 05:04 AM
watch, learn, lay an ambush? - by Rieverre - 04-26-2006, 03:14 PM
Something like that - by Valles - 04-27-2006, 01:10 AM
the foibles of attention - by Rieverre - 04-27-2006, 10:17 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by katreus - 04-27-2006, 11:54 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by Rieverre - 04-27-2006, 12:03 PM
Re: the foibles of attention - by Valles - 04-29-2006, 05:15 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by katreus - 04-29-2006, 05:50 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by WengFook - 04-29-2006, 10:06 AM
a brief change of focus - by Rieverre - 04-29-2006, 06:04 PM
of interest - by Rieverre - 05-02-2006, 04:13 PM
Re: of interest - by WengFook - 05-02-2006, 04:58 PM
Re: of interest - by katreus - 05-02-2006, 06:53 PM
teh win - by Rieverre - 05-07-2006, 04:58 PM
All might not be lost... - by ordnance11 - 05-07-2006, 06:02 PM
Worldbuilding - by Valles - 05-10-2006, 04:48 AM
Re: Worldbuilding - by Rieverre - 05-10-2006, 08:20 AM
I passed! Well, mostly. - by Valles - 05-12-2006, 04:43 AM
congrats, then - by Rieverre - 05-12-2006, 01:56 PM
Thanks! I'm a happy monkey right now - by Valles - 05-14-2006, 04:07 AM
welcome to the killing grounds ... - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 05:31 PM
Measurements - by DKnight54 - 05-16-2006, 02:44 PM
Re: Measurements - by Valles - 05-16-2006, 03:34 PM
watch to learn - by Rieverre - 05-16-2006, 04:59 PM
Re: watch to learn - by katreus - 05-18-2006, 11:42 AM
Re: watch to learn - by Valles - 05-21-2006, 03:46 AM
Re: watch to learn - by katreus - 05-21-2006, 04:01 AM
against king and country - by Rieverre - 05-22-2006, 09:08 PM
Major big time boggle - by ordnance11 - 05-22-2006, 11:27 PM
Learn to watch - by Valles - 06-27-2006, 06:03 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by CattyNebulart - 06-27-2006, 02:31 PM
finders keepers - by Rieverre - 06-28-2006, 03:37 AM
maaaa - by Rieverre - 08-24-2006, 06:04 PM
For edification: - by ordnance11 - 08-24-2006, 06:54 PM
... damnit ... - by Rieverre - 08-24-2006, 07:50 PM
re:dammit - by ordnance11 - 08-24-2006, 10:51 PM
Zero no Tsukaima - by Foxboy - 08-25-2006, 06:39 AM
re:Zero no Tsukaima - by Rieverre - 08-27-2006, 03:59 AM
Re: re:Zero no Tsukaima - by ClassicDrogn - 08-27-2006, 04:42 AM
Zero no Tsukaima fic snippet - by Rieverre - 08-29-2006, 07:59 PM
re:Zero no Tsukaima fic snippet - by ordnance11 - 08-29-2006, 11:31 PM
THe funniest part for -me- - by katreus - 08-30-2006, 02:28 AM
ZnT - continued - by Rieverre - 09-04-2006, 01:05 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by Valles - 09-05-2006, 04:50 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by ClassicDrogn - 09-05-2006, 06:22 AM
to the victor go the spoils? - by Rieverre - 09-05-2006, 04:35 PM
Justice Tempered by Humanity - by SkyeFire - 09-05-2006, 09:41 PM
just one step closer to the edge - by Rieverre - 10-04-2006, 07:05 PM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by Sirrocco - 10-06-2006, 07:54 PM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by CattyNebulart - 12-04-2006, 01:39 AM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by Elsa Bibat - 12-25-2006, 04:59 PM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by Valles - 12-31-2006, 10:17 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by Valles - 01-01-2007, 07:45 PM
Re: Learn to watch - by Rieverre - 01-02-2007, 12:49 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by AbyssalDaemon - 01-02-2007, 05:30 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by Rieverre - 01-02-2007, 06:14 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by AbyssalDaemon - 01-02-2007, 06:59 AM
Hey Valles: - by ordnance11 - 04-29-2007, 08:57 PM
Hey Valles: - by Rieverre - 05-03-2007, 12:25 AM
Story of my life - by ordnance11 - 05-09-2007, 03:41 AM
Speaking of which - by DKnight54 - 05-09-2007, 03:51 AM
Re: Speaking of which - by Florin - 05-12-2007, 10:36 AM

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