Oooooh. Shiny.
I'm way behind on my Naruto-manga - I think the last chapter I read was the one where Kabuto showed up again - so I can't really comment on Yugito's characterisation or that of the Hidden Cloud beyond saying that I think you've underestimated the relative, um, benevolence of the Leaf approach to the care and feeding of young ninja and that I like your Yugito in spite of that uneasiness.
That said, I'm looking forward to seeing whether Yugito seduces Naruto's loyalty or vice versa (my money's on the latter), and to her reaction once she gets a look at the real Sakura.
Then again, I'm a rabid Sakura fanboy, so that last is only to be expected.
Ja, -n
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"I'm terribly sorry, but I have to kill you quite horribly now."
I'm way behind on my Naruto-manga - I think the last chapter I read was the one where Kabuto showed up again - so I can't really comment on Yugito's characterisation or that of the Hidden Cloud beyond saying that I think you've underestimated the relative, um, benevolence of the Leaf approach to the care and feeding of young ninja and that I like your Yugito in spite of that uneasiness.
That said, I'm looking forward to seeing whether Yugito seduces Naruto's loyalty or vice versa (my money's on the latter), and to her reaction once she gets a look at the real Sakura.
Then again, I'm a rabid Sakura fanboy, so that last is only to be expected.
Ja, -n
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"I'm terribly sorry, but I have to kill you quite horribly now."