I gotta agree. This is both original and damn good, and I wanna see more of it. Can't think of any negative comments.
Well...okay, the formatting sorta gets to me...no line breaks or indents between paragraphs, makes it slightly harder to read.
But that's just me, and it's a seperate issue from the quality of the story. Which is great.
-- Acyl
Well...okay, the formatting sorta gets to me...no line breaks or indents between paragraphs, makes it slightly harder to read.
But that's just me, and it's a seperate issue from the quality of the story. Which is great.
-- Acyl