Only thing I can think of is a little more explanation of what exactally a Fate Shield is, unless your hiding that for plot reasons.
Also, I found it kinda odd that he just took off in the morning without talking to his houseguest.--
Jimmy Hendrix is calling me! He's telling me to defeat Klingons! CAPTAIN PICARD!
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If you become a monster to put down a monster you've still got a monster running around at the end of the day and have as such not really solved the whole monster problem at all.
Also, I found it kinda odd that he just took off in the morning without talking to his houseguest.--
Jimmy Hendrix is calling me! He's telling me to defeat Klingons! CAPTAIN PICARD!
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If you become a monster to put down a monster you've still got a monster running around at the end of the day and have as such not really solved the whole monster problem at all.