Quote:It's this, though bordering on annoyance. Try adding some details, most irrelevant and others not relevant till much later to the character. Have him shave in the morning so you have some excuse for self contemplation or something, thinking about getting a haircut, wondering if they cleaned up the mess by gate 7 yet and so forth. It can easily be as puzzeling as the rest but at least we would have mnore pieces.
If the feeling is that you don't know everything you might want to know and are curious, that's good.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."