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Into the pool
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Well, getting things a little clearer, a little smoother, that's always good. But planting questions in the reader's mind isn't a bad thing either... and, really, our narrator is off-balance. So not having everything spelt out contributes to a sense of...confusion, which goes with what our hero's feeling.
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Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-20-2006, 08:08 AM
Re: Into the pool - by CattyNebulart - 11-20-2006, 10:41 AM
Re: Into the pool - by happerry - 11-20-2006, 06:08 PM
Which magical girl? - by ordnance11 - 11-20-2006, 10:44 PM
Re: Which magical girl? - by Sirrocco - 11-21-2006, 04:04 AM
Re: Which magical girl? - by Black Aeronaut - 11-21-2006, 04:47 AM
Re: Which magical girl? - by K sai - 11-21-2006, 05:40 AM
Re: Which magical girl? - by Acyl - 11-21-2006, 03:09 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-23-2006, 03:51 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-26-2006, 09:08 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Florin - 11-26-2006, 11:41 AM
Re: Into the pool - by CattyNebulart - 11-26-2006, 11:43 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-26-2006, 09:17 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Florin - 11-27-2006, 01:43 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-27-2006, 05:27 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Valles - 11-27-2006, 07:17 AM
Re: Into the pool - by happerry - 11-27-2006, 07:34 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-27-2006, 07:35 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-27-2006, 07:39 AM
Re: Into the pool - by CattyNebulart - 11-27-2006, 08:18 AM
Re: Into the pool - by CattyNebulart - 11-27-2006, 09:00 AM
drill sergeants - by Sirrocco - 11-28-2006, 05:47 PM
next bit - by Sirrocco - 11-28-2006, 06:15 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Acyl - 11-28-2006, 06:48 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Black Aeronaut - 11-29-2006, 12:48 AM
Re: Into the pool - by kestrel404 - 11-29-2006, 01:29 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 11-29-2006, 04:53 AM
First Covenant - by kestrel404 - 11-29-2006, 07:15 AM
Re: First Covenant - by Sirrocco - 11-29-2006, 08:49 AM
Re: First Covenant - by Florin - 11-29-2006, 11:44 AM
Re: First Covenant - by Valles - 11-29-2006, 11:56 AM
Re: Prophecy - by Sirrocco - 12-01-2006, 12:38 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Hollow49 - 12-01-2006, 01:11 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-02-2006, 06:43 AM
Re: Into the pool - by CattyNebulart - 12-02-2006, 12:52 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-02-2006, 06:19 PM
Re: Into the pool - by CattyNebulart - 12-02-2006, 07:11 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-26-2006, 11:59 PM
Re: Into the pool - by DHBirr - 12-27-2006, 02:20 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-27-2006, 03:31 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Rieverre - 12-27-2006, 04:11 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-28-2006, 07:43 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Acyl - 12-28-2006, 08:08 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-28-2006, 09:25 AM
Re: Into the pool - by kestrel404 - 12-28-2006, 05:43 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Acyl - 12-28-2006, 08:20 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-28-2006, 11:26 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 12-29-2006, 04:00 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Hollow49 - 01-28-2007, 11:46 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 01-30-2007, 06:14 AM
Re: Into the pool - by DHBirr - 01-30-2007, 08:14 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 01-30-2007, 08:43 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 01-30-2007, 08:46 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Black Aeronaut - 01-30-2007, 09:29 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Alex DarkFire - 01-30-2007, 04:16 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 01-30-2007, 05:36 PM
Re: Into the pool - by Hollow49 - 02-03-2007, 07:45 PM
Re: Into the pool - by happerry - 02-04-2007, 12:25 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 02-04-2007, 05:01 AM
Re: Into the pool - by DHBirr - 02-04-2007, 05:07 AM
Re: Into the pool - by Sirrocco - 02-04-2007, 05:41 AM
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