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Idea: A Step in the Wrong Direction
Idea: A Step in the Wrong Direction
#1
The Loon is having a very very very bad day.
This isn't a good place to be if you're an out-of-towner. It's not even good for the -natives-, but if they knew Doug's true nature... well, they'd probably misinterpret it, but even if not he'd be in horrible danger.
Then again, he's in horrible danger NOW.
With extremely careful use of Lightning's Hand, he's managed to forge a local identity--not high enough social status to draw attention, but not low enough to be casually killed. He hopes. Further use of LH is not a good idea--with the (literally) insane tech level, it'd get noticed. It may have BEEN noticed.
It can't last. Sooner or later, someone will catch on and THEY will be after him. Who's THEY? Who isn't?
And it's such a damned hideous world, too. Danger is everywhere, everyone is afraid of everyone else, and disregard for human life isn't just standard--it's practically mandatory. Many things are mandatory around here, but that one sticks out.
And the worst part--the absolute ultimate WORST part--
--Doug's pretty sure that if he saw this world from Outside, as a movie or a game or something, he'd be laughing his ass off. But from down here in the corridors, it isn't funny at all.
Someone's probably laughing at him right now...
He's got to find a gate song fast, before this place gets under his skin and never -ever- leaves.
Because Citizen Loon-Y-TNS-1 is developing a classic case of... PARANOIA.
Stay alert.
Trust no one.
Keep your helmet handy.
--Sam
"Isn't it nice...? Isn't it keen...? Living in Complexes run by... machines..."
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Because Citizen Loon-Y-TNS-1 is developing a classic case of... PARANOIA.
Better to forge it so that he's officially listed as -6... that way no one's wondering where the rest of his batch is.
other than that....
::SHATTER::
"I was an Otaku before those kids came along and changed the meaning of the word."
-- HM "Howling Mad" Wilson to more than one team-mate.
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-

NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children
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#3
Oh.
Dear.
God.

-- Bob
(Remembering many, many happy Paranoia games...)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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#4
>Oh.
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>Dear.
>
>God.
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>-- Bob
>(Remembering many, many happy Paranoia games...)
Warning! Warning! Imagination Triggered! Beware Stampeding Wild Ideas!

Kevin Cody
Drunkard's Walk II Pre-Reader
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#5
O_o
o_O
BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEEE!!!!
(Coming up for air...)
Man I am so glad I wasn't drinking or eating anything right then.
Roit! That goes straight into the Omake file!
-Logan
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"This is getting ridiculous. If I hear one more..."
"So gone, gone o form of man... arise the Sailor Etrigan!" called out another voice.
*poof* A yellow-skinned horned demon stood there.
In a very short Sailor fuku.
He had really ugly yellow knobby knees, too.
The cigarette finally dropped from John
Constantine's mouth. "Okay, that's it, I'm
gone. See you lads later."

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I do hope that this means you plan on doing a short fic of this - I don't think it has enough meat for a full step, but you were looking for short story ideas... Smile
Offsides
Drunkard's Walk Forum Moderator and Prereader At Large
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That was mainly me copying it down for future reference. There is something about this that I really, really like, and I definitely want to do something with it -- I'm just not sure when...

-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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