Halfway through writing a scene with Fatima Nuygen, and then my brain realises I was misremembering her original story, and that she's not a reported, she's the idiot political analyst the idiot reporter turned to for a false summary. *Considers how to rewrite*
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I hate when that happens.
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John Simmons, the reporter that story actually has as the reporter. I'm not seeing him anywhere else. Would there be a problem with putting him into the role instead?
Don't see one.
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EDIT: Of course, if you really want Nuygen in the crowd, maybe she got a demotion to "features reporter" after too many bad analyses... -- Rob Kelk "Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of the same sovereign, servants of the same law." - Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
That was the idea, but I ended up rewriting the scene on the flight to Denver, and I don't want to redo it all again. Instead, it's the guy that got a rep as a bad fanfic writer
 EDIT: It's more that I wanted a repeat offender of 'making shit up and calling it news', and when combined with the Infinities story, Fatima qualifies. But at the same time John's just as bad
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