"The Rise of the Shadow Circle" -- Arc # 425755

[Bob Schroeck]

After a little tweaking based on the comments I got a few weeks back,
I've published my arc (tagged as "Looking for feedback" since I'm not
100% satisfied with it, but satisfied enough...)

Anyway, I'd be very grateful if folks would give it a play and comment/rate it, please.

Thank you.
(ETA:  I tweaked the arc a little this morning, and the number changed
when I saved it.  Please note the new number in the threat title.)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.

[Niteflier]

Uh, Bob? Don't upload a new one. There's an option when editing your old arcs to 'Reupload'. This keeps ratings across versions.

[Bob Schroeck]

I didn't notice a "reupload" option. And I had no ratings yet anyway, so I wasn't too concerned. If I had, I would have been a bit upset, but as far as I can tell, my runthrough last night with Range Sabre was the only time it got any play since I published it. (Not that that's been all that long, but hey.)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.