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New Teaser from Chapter 13
New Teaser from Chapter 13
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(After Doug listens to the recordings made during the big fight in chapter 12...)
Well, now I knew their names. Celia. Linna. (Or maybe "Lynne",spelled English and pronounced Japanese.) Pris. (I knew a Pris,once, an android. She was a sweet kid, before that arms smugglerkilled her.) And the last one. I wasn't sure how to spell it,in either kana or Roman letters -- Naynay? Neinei? Somethinglike that. Probably a nickname of some sort -- maybe she alwaysvoted "no" at their meetings. Or maybe she liked horses --Neigh-Neigh?Nah. That was too strange, even for me.It was the most distinctive of the four names. If I could havejust settled on a spelling, I might have tried a search for herin the online telecomm directory for MegaTokyo. Just in case itwasn't a nickname. But that seemed far too unlikely.

-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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... why not tease us with the complete chapter? ... :-)
-- Cal
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#3
Then it wouldn't be a teaser... :p
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... why not tease us with the complete chapter? ... :-)
'Cause it ain't done yet.
But when it is, it'll be a hell of a teaser for chapter 14.

-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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'Cause it ain't done yet.
then teast us with what you've got Smile-Z, Post-reader at Medium
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If architects built buildings the way programmers write programs, the first woodpecker to come along would destroy civilization.
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Sorry, you'll just have to wait.

-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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Sorry, you'll just have to wait.
Tease. Tongue
-Z, Post-reader at Medium
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If architects built buildings the way programmers write programs, the first woodpecker to come along would destroy civilization.
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#8
Well, yes, that's the point.


-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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Well, yes, that's the point.
But, you wouldn't do that to an orphan, would you?
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Damn. If only I could remember the proper phrasing of one of the often/orphan lines...
-- Bob
(Edit: removing the parents of an anime character...)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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But, you wouldn't do that to an orphan, would you?
HEY! That's MY line!!! Just look at my Title! Smile
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