>Dedicated to the above, ah, *enthusiasts*, who took a random plotbunny and fed it until it demanded release. Remember, this is YOUR fault I'm doing this, guys.<
And reading what you spawned here, I can safely say I feel that history will vindicate us.
Loved the intro, and the Gai bits were priceless. Maito Gai, the human emotional rollercoaster of Konoha. Heh.
Nice moment of Naruto introspection at the end there. You manage to bring Rikou in smoothly, without it being glaring that she's a potential ANC ... well, glaring other than her outfit's color-scheme.
>(Would you like to know more?)<
I know where you live, I know where you ... no, waitasec, I don't. Damn. Err ... yes, please?
Oh, and nice pic. A little polishing and it'd make a good cover.
-Griever
studen of the Way of the Slacker since 1998.
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm
And reading what you spawned here, I can safely say I feel that history will vindicate us.
Loved the intro, and the Gai bits were priceless. Maito Gai, the human emotional rollercoaster of Konoha. Heh.
Nice moment of Naruto introspection at the end there. You manage to bring Rikou in smoothly, without it being glaring that she's a potential ANC ... well, glaring other than her outfit's color-scheme.
>(Would you like to know more?)<
I know where you live, I know where you ... no, waitasec, I don't. Damn. Err ... yes, please?
Oh, and nice pic. A little polishing and it'd make a good cover.
-Griever
studen of the Way of the Slacker since 1998.
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm