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TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!!
Re: > TXY: SEARCH FOR GERO SAN-NIN!! (partial draft)
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I have to wonder though, as to where Naruto's face was. After all, since he's graduated a year early and Rikou is at least most of a year younger than he, that would make her all of, what, ten? Granted she'd almost have to be an early developer, that's still quite young. It might be better to turn that moment into another Maito Glomping Technique (as opposed to her father's Manly Hugs technique) - which at that age would probably have about that effect.
That was one of the things I changed, after eealising the inherent problem with her having been born after the kyuubi attack and yet a year older than Naruto (She COULD have graduated ahead of schedule, but wanted to stay with freinds her own age, and since Gai knows the difference between 'weak genin,' 'strong genin,' and 'chuunin' he didn't push in that way - all either of them care about is having her strength progress and rank keeping up with it, not the other way around) The intro was edited so that Young Gai saved Rikou's mother from an attack during the Leaf/Stone war.
She's got two good handfuls, but not much more - and with her body fat percentage, she's lucky to have that much. (Her mother's side of the family is often well-endowed. Picture Kasumi Tendo with black hair and a kabuki stagehand uniform.) The Rikou in the picture I did is accurate.
Thanks for the catches! Writing on my handheld, I don't have a spellchecker, and lets just say that my stylus-tap typing is not the most accurate, so while I catch lots of stuff myself reading it over there's always a couple I don't.
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TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by ClassicDrogn - 07-25-2005, 07:14 AM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 07-25-2005, 07:56 AM
Very sketchy image - by ClassicDrogn - 07-25-2005, 10:13 AM
re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Rieverre - 07-25-2005, 10:58 AM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 07-25-2005, 04:26 PM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by The Wanderer - 07-25-2005, 10:48 PM
Ooh! Ooh! World building! - by ClassicDrogn - 07-25-2005, 11:39 PM
Re: Ooh! Ooh! World building! - by ClassicDrogn - 07-26-2005, 01:12 PM
Re: re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Acyl - 07-26-2005, 06:24 PM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Herr Bad Moon - 07-27-2005, 05:49 AM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 07-28-2005, 05:56 AM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 07-28-2005, 10:08 AM
Re: Tenten/Neshan convo - by ClassicDrogn - 07-29-2005, 06:35 PM
TXY! - by Foxboy - 07-30-2005, 04:44 AM
Re: TXY! - by ClassicDrogn - 07-30-2005, 04:55 AM
Re: > TXY: SEARCH FOR GERO SAN-NIN!! (partial draft) - by ClassicDrogn - 07-30-2005, 04:11 PM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 08-03-2005, 04:41 AM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 08-03-2005, 05:55 PM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 08-03-2005, 10:25 PM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 08-04-2005, 12:34 AM
Re: TEAM EXPLOSIVE YOUTH! HASSHIN!! - by Valles - 08-04-2005, 06:13 AM
Re: Amusing Image, and associated realization - by Herr Bad Moon - 08-09-2005, 05:37 AM
TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 01-13-2006, 05:34 AM
Re: TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-09-2006, 09:11 AM
Re: TXY2 - by Acyl - 07-09-2006, 10:26 AM
Re: TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-09-2006, 11:23 AM
Re: TXY2 - by Acyl - 07-09-2006, 07:10 PM
Re: TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-09-2006, 08:52 PM
Re: TXY2 - by Acyl - 07-10-2006, 02:59 AM
Re: TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-10-2006, 03:16 AM
Re: TXY2 - by Valles - 07-10-2006, 03:20 AM
Re: TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-12-2006, 09:00 PM
Re: TXY2 - by Valles - 07-29-2006, 12:30 PM
Re: TXY2 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-29-2006, 12:52 PM

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