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TGNH - Chapter 2
TGNH - Chapter 2
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TEENAGE GENIN NINJA HEROES
chapter 2
Five Beginnings, a Departure, and a Memory

JUNE, TWELFTH YEAR AFTER THE ATTACK OF THE KYUUBI
"REEEOOOOOOOOWW!"
"Itai! Itai! Hold -still-, you idiot cat!" Naruto howled, nearly as loudly as his prisoner.
"Don't hold it so roughly!" Sakura scolded. "It won't stop -fighting- while you're crushing its ribs!"
Sasuke counted his way down the checklist. "Ginger tabby, bow on left ear, tomcat, approximately seventeen pounds. This looks like our target." [And,] he carefully did not say, [our fifth perfect mission.]
"Yep," their Sensei, Neshan, confirmed. "This is Tora, all right. Take a good look; you'll be getting to know him -real- well."
"He runs away a lot?" Sakura guessed, holding one hand firmly on the back of the cat's neck while supporting his weight by the other arm. {Who'd want him -back-?} her second personality remarked from the security of her subconcious, with a figurative glare at the way the feline was digging his claws into her arm.
Naruto had been nursing the scratches on his face and bite on his hand after being relieved of his infuriated burden, but now he looked up and grinned. "Ano sa, ano sa, does that mean we get a real mission now?"
Neshan felt free to smirk, since he was turned away from the Genin and it couldn't be seen. "By rights, that question should disqualify you..."
"Ehh? No, wait, I understand! Really! We need to-"
"Understand the importance of details in even the most power-intensive fight." His voice, deliberately stern, wavered on the last word.
Naruto didn't notice. "But, Seeeeennnseeeeeiiii!"
The Jounin laughed. "Oh, don't worry. I'm just winding you up. Once we get Tigger here back to Madame Shijimi, you three can knock off 'till noon. Meet me at the usual field; I'll talk to the Third about having a mission for you tomorrow." None of the students bothered to wonder who or what a 'tigger' was. Their sensei was an immigrant to Konoha, and even after spending most of his life there, was still prone to making allusions to the tales and culture of his homeland - regardless of the fact that no one around him had any clue what he was talking about. Eventually, like gnats or mosquitos, it had simply become something to be accepted.
"YAAHOOOO!" Konoha's Loudest Ninja lived up to his nickname.
* * * * *
"Well, I'll be damned."
Sakura was dancing across the center of the turbulent pool under the small waterfall, running through the fifth of the eight academy taijutsu kata at half speed. Despite her movement and shifting weight, and the instability of the surface underneath her, her feet left not even a ripple to mark their passing.
Sasuke was climbing a tree on the opposite bank, walking slowly up with never a wobble or a missed step. Already he was halfway up with nary a scar on the bark, and from the scuffing of the dirt at the tree's base he'd been at it a while.
Naruto was sitting in the grass at the top of the small cliff, with three different, -large- scrolls spread out before him. Neshan recognized the end-caps on the nearest one - the tactical manual he had given to his student.
"Oi, you," came a voice from behind him. "These the super gifted kids you said'd be handling Gatou's thugs?"
"Just so, Tazuna-san. YO! MINIONS!"
*splishthumpwhap...flutterflutter... bumpbumpbump* At their teacher's shout, all three Genin had abandoned what they were doing and crossed the distance to land if front of him in a single leap.
"Sensei, who's this?" Sakura asked, peering up at the balding, slovenly man in front of her. {Eeeew... if he starts -scratching-, I'll hurl!}
Neshan didn't answer immediately, instead turning to their guest and gesturing towards his students in turn. "Umida-san, these are my students - Haruno Sakura, Uzumaki Naruto, and Uchiha Sasuke. Kids, this is our client for a C-class bodyguard mission to the Wave Country. His name is Umida Tazuna."
"Yosh!" Naruto cheered, giving a thumbs up. "Don't you worry about a thing, Pops! Nobody's gonna touch you while -I'm- around!"
"Hmph. I oughta go back and ask for a team without a super loudmouthed idiot on it."
"What?! Hey, you! Don't you think tha-MPH!" Sakura grabbed him into a one-armed headlock and clapped the other hand firmly over her teammate's mouth. Even without accounting for his crush on her, Naruto knew that - with the taijutsu training she'd been doing since graduation - he had no chance of winning a grappling match unless she -let- him do so. He crossed his arms and subsided in bad grace.
Neshan smiled benignly over the scene. "Considering your failure to provide accurate information, I think that we're actually being quite generous."
Sasuke cocked an eyebrow, and Sakura let her hand fall away from Naruto's face as both of them stared on with identical expressions of shock.
Tazuna froze, for a moment, then slumped defeatedly. "You know...?"
"Quite a bit more than you, I think. But, under the circumstances, your credit is good, and the interest on the balance of your payment quite reasonable."
The architecht closed his eyes and sighed. "Heh. Well, I guess that's the best I could hope for in this super-bad situation."
"Right, so. If you're amenable to departing in, say, two hours, then we can let the kids get home and pack, right?"
"Two hours, right." And he turned and walked away, head, for once, held high.
"Sensei..." Sakura said, standing away from her shorter compatriot. "What you said... this is a -B-CLASS- mission?!" {Damn it! Is he trying to -kill- us?!}
He nodded, slowly. "Almost certainly. However... As a Special Jounin, I am prohibited from spending extended periods of time away from the village. This will be the only high-level mission I'll be able to take with you. This will be my -only- opportunity to... show you what I want to teach you. The greater dangers... I believe that they'll help to teach you more than you'd otherwise be able to learn." He adjusted his glasses and looked at them seriously. "And your performance in your training has been beyond my wildest expectations. In terms of pure combat ability... all three of you are already Chuunin level."
"But not in other ways," Naruto said, dissapointed.
Neshan laid a hand on his shoulder. "You've all three of you got some growing up to do. You -could- do it right away, if you had to - but there's no reason you should. You're better off waiting - it'll be healthier in the long run."
"I'm not a child," he snarled.
"If you need to say that - you are. For now." He tapped Naruto on the side of the chin, forcing the smaller boy to meet his gaze directly. "Don't be in such a hurry. Most of the time, adulthood sucks. You work, you worry, you suffer... For every restriction you lose from outside, you gain three more inside your head. The more careful you are about this - the more groundwork you lay now - the smaller the real price you'll have to pay later."
"Price?" Sakura asked, hovering uncertainly on the edges of their conversation.
"Everything has a cost, kid. Maturity's is paid in pain. Now go on. Clock's running."
* * * * *
"MOOOOOM!" Sakura yelled, head buried in her closet.
"What!" came the muffled reply from downstairs.
"WHERE'S MY FIRE KIT?"
"You used it! Replacement's with the groceries!"
"THANKS!"
Fire kit, rations, weapons, medical kit, bandages, more weapons, drug kit, toiletries...
"Aaaaannd a change of clothes!" she said triumphantly, pulling something from amid the shoulder-high mountain of cloth and letting it unfurl to reveal...
A bright green leotard. "Ugh. Not that."
A bra - one of her mother's, which must've gotten mixed in with her laundry. No telling how long ago, given -her- room. "Not yet, dammit."
A bikini top with noticably less fabric than the previous item. *blush* "Um, no."
Her best friend snickered. "Not until it's too small for you, anyway."
"Bite me, Ino-buta." It was so -nice- to be friends with Ino again! Granted, she'd have been just as glad to be spared Anko-sensei's chosen means of forcing them to make up - she -still- couldn't get the sulfer stink out of what -had- been her favorite pair of sandals - but if that was the only thing she lost getting her sister-in-arms back, then she'd count it as cheap at twice the price.
"Why are you even bothering, anyway, Odeko-chan? You know you'll just end up taking another of those tacky red dresses." To hear Ino tell -her- version of the leadup to that entirely-too-memorable night, involving the obnoxious Special Jounin in the conspiracy to rescue their friendship actually -hadn't- been Neshan-sensei's idea... which was kind of startling when you considered that he was basically the psycho-woman's best friend.
"They are -not- tacky!" She whirled, hands going to her hips, then tossed her head, flipping her braid back over her shoulder. "Besides, I lost my last clean one."
The third person in the room decided to calm things down before the other two started one of their fights - again. "How on earth do you find -anything- in here, anyway?" Tenten asked. -That- friendship, though, -was- her teacher's fault. He had taken her to a man he had called 'the Leaf's greatest Taijutsu specialist' to learn what he had described as the perfected variant of the basic hand-to-hand forms that she - along with all the other students in her year - had been taught in the academy.
Whatever she had been expecting, a thirty year old man with a spandex fetish and eyebrows that could have doubled for bottle-brushes was -not- it. That would have been enough of a dissapointment, but the apparition had gone on to cement the impression of complete and pathetic insanity by introducing himself as 'That Friend of Youth and educator of fertile young minds, Konoha's Beautiful Green Beast - Maitooooooo GAI!'
Despite his talk of being an educator, though, it had taken Tenten's intervention - spurred by Neshan's offer to teach her the deceptively subtle jutsu he used to give his thrown weapons such force of impact - to convince Gai to polish Sakura's taijutsu techniques.
Tenten had looked at the kunai Neshan had buried most of its own length into the living wood of the large tree at the center of the clearing where Team Gai had been practicing, then walked, head bowed, over to stand in front of her instructor. When she looked up, unshed tears had glimmered across the corners of her eyes. 'If you say no,' she had said, voice trembling, 'I'll cry.'
Gai had refused at first, saying that 'The splendor of her shining youth would be smirched were I to interfere so with her education! By forging its -own- path to greatness, her star will shine far brighter!'
Tenten had sniffled.
That had been enough - almost - to drop the eccentric Jounin into a panic. 'Tenten! Be strong! The glittering shine of-'
- the single tear breaking free and rolling down Tenten's cheek. Gai had agreed to the bargain with an apologetic howl, and no one present had really regretted it. In the end, the two girls had even accounted the greatest benefit as being, not the improvments to their skills, but their new friend.
Sakura crossed her arms, bikini still dangling from one hand. "It's not as disorganized as it looks," she sniffed.
"No," Ino wisecracked. "It's worse."
Tenten snickered. "That's possible?"
The pink-haired girl fumed for a moment, then dropped the bikini, grabbed the nearest throwable object... and ducked, eyes going wide. *fwipTHWAK* "Eep!"
The oldest girl froze in place, staring at the object her kunai had impaled against the corkboard over the desk. Sakura turned to look at it, then stared also.
"BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Ino fell over laughing as Sakura blushed and started frantically trying to pry the kunai out and close the book - or at least turn it to a less embarrassing - and less dog-eared - page.
Tenten sat there in horror for a moment longer, then tried to apologize - tried, since the effort kept getting tangled up with the twin urges to laugh at the sheer absurdity of the situation and lock up in tongue-tied mortification at exactly -which- of that notorious book's pages had been showing. In the end, she did none of them. "Ano... -Icha Icha Paradise-?!"
*pop!* Sakura finally pulled the blade free - it had gone straight through, all the way into the wall. "you'd think i'd know better than to throw things at you by now... Rrg. My brother's a jerk."
"That wasn't a page a -guy- would turn to, Odeko-chaaaAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Ino smirked at the opportunity to deliver a well-deserved zinger onto her best friend, but the other girl's squinting glare had been the final straw needed to shatter her hard-won control and send her spiraling back into helpless laughter.
"Grrrr." Sakura took a short step over the tangled pile of knitting supplies wrapped halfway around the desk chair's back leg, then a long one over the shallow mound of dirty clothes on top of her favorite Go board, then a second short one to balance on top of the heavy staff braced over her stereo and three different piles of scolls by the base of her bed and the surface of the desk. Both of the other girls had been sitting on the bed, since it was by far the largest clear space in the room, and Tenten casually reached out a leg and tripped the younger kunoichi before she could lock her hands around her helpless best friend's throat.
"Ne, ne, Sakura? You can drop by my house on your way out of town and borrow one of my outfits - you really don't have much more time to look, you know."
"Really?" she said, voice badly muffled by the mattress.
"Really-really," Tenten confirmed with a smile.
* * * * *
As passers-by went, he was as unremarkable as they came. Average height, average build, brown eyes and shortish hair-colored hair. Respectably but not flashily dressed, his age was in that indeterminate zone between the late twenties and the early forties, and he moved down the street with the determined stride of a definite Type A traveller.
A slightly drunken gaggle of giggling kawaii passed him on the other side of the street, going the opposite direction. The words 'Uchiha' and 'whipped cream' could be heard drifting up faintly out of the center of the cluster of a dozen or so girls.
The anonymous man shuddered slightly.
Conventional wisdom said that most kunoichi were best suited to act as Genjutsu specialists, and that most Genjutsu users were likewise female. The precise reasoning behind this conclusion varied, of course, but generally ran to the effect of the aptitude being a result - or cause - of female ninjas' more deceptive, manipulative natures. As opposed to the agressive, combative nature of their male counterparts, of course.
The kindest thing Neshan-sensei had had to say about that line of thought was 'Bunk!'
And the development of Team Seven seemed to have borne his thought out. Naruto's tactics had gone from childishly simple to -deceptively- simple, and were well backed by a growing array of quick-acting but power-intensive ninjutsu. Even the short month since the formation of their team had given Sakura the time to begin to explore the wealth of strategies opened up by ever-increasing taijutsu skills... and the exceptional strength and speed that had led to their creation.
And Sasuke - posessing both an observant and detail-oriented mind and the deep chakra reserves neccessary to shape the truly dangerous high-level genjutsu - was well on his way to trading in his title to become Konoha's Number One -Genin-.
The anonymous man smiled, and hitched his pack higher on his shoulder.
He had to meet his team.
* * * * *
Nightcap, pajamas.
The Gatou syndicate was primarily a trading concern. It moved about a quarter of the cargo moving across the Mist Sea, and 98% of that going to the Wave Country.
Kunai, shuriken, Fuuma Shuriken.
Since the Whitefish Guild had gone out of business - leaving Gatou with its current monopoly - the Gross National Product of the Wave Country had dropped by more than a third. Most of Gatou's profits from its control of the Wave trade stemmed from its ability to offer lower wages in the now-destitute Wave than it would in more affluent nations. By locating the majority of its construction and refit yards in the Wave Country, the Gatou Group could cut its operating expenses considerably.
Ramen, firestarter.
While the Wave Country was made up of a large number of individual islands, the straits between them were narrow enough to be easily crossed by ferry - even the broadest would take only an hour or two. In contrast, the trip from the islands to the mainland required most of a day.
First aid kit, canteen.
When it was finished, the causeway currently under construction would be the largest bridge of any type anywhere in the world. More relevantly, it would allow anyone with a cart or a motor-truck access to the Wave, not only reversing the depression brought on by the Gatou Group's high freight rates but probably as much as doubling the Wave's GNP.
Spare jacket, more ramen.
With that much of an improvement in local industry, wages would rise - massively. The Wave's exports of exotic woods and marine delicacies would drive the economy until its standard of living became one of the highest in the world. The Gatou Group's profit margin, when deprived of cheap labor in the Wave Country, would take a massive hit - a fifty percent reduction at the very least, probably more.
Toothbrush, toothpaste.
The head of the Gatou Group, a man by the same name, was known for being both agressive and utterly ruthless. He had no respect for the laws of the countries in which he operated, much less anything as empherial as 'morals'. With the wealth of his company available for the purpose, it was well within both his means and his character to hire legal ninja or missing-nins to assassinate the driving force behind the construction of the mainland bridge - Umida Tazuna.
Bedroll, Gama-chan.
At some point in the future, he would definitely be asked to take missions of equal or higher rating - B, A, or even S class missions so dangerous that they were given only to volunteers - but even if he did, he would never again have to do so with so little preperation. When that day came, his skills would be far in advance of those he currently posessed, and his ability to meet the challenges of those missions likewise improved.
This combination of danger and weakness would not, -could- not be repeated - his life would never be more at risk than it was now.
"Yosh!" Naruto declared, tying the straps of his backpack closed. "I'll make you proud, Sensei!" And, with a bang and a flourish, he closed and locked his apartment's door behind him, then turned and started off towards the village's gate.
"N-Naruto-kun?"
"Eh?" He turned and looked down slightly. A girl, about his age, dark blue hair, pure white eyes - not blank like if she was blind, but -white-, iris and pupil both. The bulky fur-edged jacket and faint blush tickled at his memory. "Ahhh... Hinata-chan, right?"
She jerked, slightly, as though struck lightly. "H-hai! Hyuuga Hinata."
Was she afraid he'd hurt her? "Right, I remember! From the Academy! You were right after Sasuke in Taijutsu!"
She smiled, slightly, and the blush got noticeably deeped. "H-hai. A-a-ano... I was wondering..." she trailed off and started to nibble at the first knuckle of her right hand.
Huh? "Ne, ne, wondering what?" he prompted.
"I was w-wondering if... if you'd..." She swallowed hard and took a deep breath, then bowed her head and blurted, "ifyoudliketoeatlunchwithme!" Then she froze, and her face was the color of a beet as she bit her bottom lip unconciously.
She... wanted to eat lunch... with -him-? That meant... that meant...
That meant she wanted to be friends!
He put a hand behind his head and laughed sheepishly. Now of all times! "Eheheh... Sorry, Hinata-chan, but I can't." She slumped visibly. "Demo, demo! When I get back from my mission I can take you to Ichiraku!"
Her face positively -lit- up, and he could have sworn he saw the wilted blooms in Mrs. Yamada's flowerbox perk up and start to glow with health. [Wow,] he realized. [Hinata-chan's actually kind of pretty.]
"Hai!" She bowed, abruptly. "It's a da- a deal!"
He grinned and waved over his shoulder as he bolted off. "Great! See ya then!"
Hyuuga Hinata smiled softly as she watched her crush rush off towards Konohagakure's main gate. [Naruto-kun... kakkoi...]
"So? Wha'd I tell ya?"
The shy Genin jumped slightly, and turned to face the one who had addressed her. -Why- did she insist on popping out of nowhere like that? "H-hai, Anko-sensei. He... I..." She lunged forward and latched on to the older woman with a fierce hug. "Thank you!"
Anko rocked back on her heels from the impact, and stared down a the blue-tinged head of hair buried against her chest for a moment. Then she smiled, more softly than anyone save her closest friends would have given her credit for, and wrapped her arms gently around her student's shoulders. "You're welcome." After a moment, she tugged at Hinata's shoulders and held her at arm's length. "So! With that done, all that's left for today is to get you set up for tomorrow's mission!"
"N-no." Hinata shook her head sharply. "I-I need to talk to... before my courage runs out. Please, Sensei, where does Team Eight train?"
[This is too fast. When he rejects her, we'll have lost everything we've made so far.] But how to dissuade her without doing the damage herself? Maybe if she-
"I know that you don't think it's a good idea to... to do this this soon," the girl interrupted her thoughts. "Demo... If I go any farther thinking that... that he really thinks of himself as my cousin... and I'm -wrong-, then... It'll all be undermined when I find out. Better... better to know now, and only have to, to build myself once." She gave a shy little smile. "Besides, I'm used... to cold family."
[I see,] Anko closed her eyes and shook her head. [I underestimated her.] "The place you want is a small clearing, about half a mile behind Field Two. Look for the big oak."
Hinata bowed again. "Arigatou!"
* * * * *
*shKRAK* Hit. *shKRAK* Hit. *shKRAK* Miss.
Yamanaka Ino curled the whip back up into a single coil with a deft twist of the wrist and gave a huff of irritation as she glared at the last of the small clay bottles sitting on the irregularly spaced bamboo poles in the center of the clearing. "Sensei," she said, "Why do I have to use -this- silly thing-" She brandished the whip at him. "-rather than a real weapon?"
"Coming from the person you want to be, it is silly," Morino Ibiki agreed, with a smile that tugged oddly at the slashing scar running across his face. "Coming from the person you -are-, though, it'll fit exactly with what your opponents expect... and exactly what they're afraid of."
She blushed. "But, that's..."
"Feh. Just give it up. Your princess act is so troublesome - especially when it doesn't work." Nara Shikamaru had already run through his chakra reserves with their earlier group training, and Ibiki had let him take an hour or so to recover before starting on his taijutsu. He lay flat on his back, staring at the cloudy sky overhead, and didn't even turn his head to look at his teammate as he spoke.
"Shi. Ka. Ma. Ruuuu..." Ino snarled as she turned to loom over him. "Maybe -you- think that-"
"Enough," Ibiki broke in. "Ino. Shikamaru. A ninja can't afford self deception, and he can't afford to alienate his teammates." He turned his head slightly, adressing Shikamaru. "Break's over. Go help Chouji with his tree-climbing. Ino, leave the whip for now and switch to the needles."
Both Genin growled and went to obey, and Ibiki took a moment to rub at the scar where his headache was concentrating most. [Yare, yare. What a team. None of the three of them are that bad alone, but put them together and... What did I do to deserve this?] He paused a moment, reviewing the last month of his professional life. [Don't answer that.]
"Oi, Chouji," Shikamaru was saying as he walked over to the pair. "If you can't move the patch quick enough, try wrapping it all the way around, so that a part of it is -always- gripping without your having to move it."
"Demo, Shikamaru, that means I'd have to hold two different jutsu at the same time," the bulky Genin objected.
"Yes," Ibiki said, interrupting, "but you'd have to learn that before you'd be ready to try for Chuunin anyway. Now's a very good time to start."
"Hmph. Alright. But this new barbeque place had better be worth it!"
The Jounin chuckled. "I've heard nothing but good things. Shikamaru, come on."
"Hai, hai..."
* * * * *
'Dear Mrs. Chin... I regret to inform you that following the full investigation of the incident detailed in my last letter to you, y-' There was a slight flicker as the letter was snatched out from in front of him.
"What'cha doin'?"
Umuino Iruka looked up, then sighed. Devilish grin, tan trenchcoat thrown over the visitor's chair behind her, net shirt, -very- nice breasts... He jerked his gaze to the side. [I wish she wouldn't -lean forwards- like that.] "Ohayo, Anko-sama."
She leaned back slightly, turning to put her perch on the edge of his desk into a more natural posture (and, to his heart rate's consternation, putting her figure above the waist into a perfect profile) and squinted at the sheet of paper in her hand. "Chin, huh? What, ya tossing him out? Nothing's wrong with the kid."
He made a futile grab for the letter. "No, not really. But with the evidence I have, I can't punish the one really responsible. I've put in a reccomendation that Hokage-sama sponsor him for re-admission, but I don't have the authority to do anything else."
She jerked it out of his reach, then sniffed and tossed it on his blotter. "Yer taking these rules too seriously. I mean, what's more important - some ink on a page somewhere or a kid losin' his dream?"
"The child, of course." He sighed and smoothed out the new wrinkles in the letter as she started to rummage through the pile of graded papers sitting to one side. "But there's other things involved, too. These same rules prevent a student from being unfairly dismissed if he offends a teacher, or another one being improperly protected after misbehavior. The fact that this time they're being abused doesn't negate that net value, or make the confidence it gives the students' parents any less vital."
She snorted and started to fold one of the reports, origami style. "A rule ain't a law, and this's why: if it gets in the way of the right thing, then it -should- be ignored. I've had both'a these kids into my office - there's no good that can come of letting some sneering little bully hide behind the letter of the law."
"If he's smart enough to do it, then I can't dismiss him," Iruka said, and his face was very cold. "I -shouldn't- dismiss him. This academy isn't here to raise good people. It's here to -train- -ninja-, and that kind of cunning is a trait that very much suits one."
There was a long, tense silence, and she set the completed paper snake on top of the stack of reports and gave him the oddest look, like equal parts shock, horror, and awe, all mixed in with a little bit of fear. When she spoke, her voice was quiet and subdued, and she did not meet his eyes. "You're right. It's just that..."
He sighed, and nodded. "They're just kids." A beat. "Anyway, was there something you needed?"
Anko shook off the funk and smiled, warmly for once, rather than edged and manic like usual. "Team Eight's doing well."
"Oh?" He perked up and leaned forward. "Tell me?"
* * * * *
"Tazuna-san, please," Neshan said as they walked side by side through downtown Konohagakure. "Our ability to help you is in direct proportion to your willingness to cooperate with us."
The slovenly architect snorted. "I'm willing. I just don't see why you'd need me to go over all this since you know everything already."
The Jounin hitched his pack up higher on his shoulder and shook his head. "We know -some-, and can guess more from that, but any new information is useful, even if all it is is the fact that two different sources agree on a given point."
"Huh." Tazuna scowled for a moment, then looked over. "I don't know if he's hired any regular ninja. If he has, he does most of his business in the Water Country, so they'll probably be from there."
Neshan nodded.
"I think he's got about four or five missing-nin on the payroll. I've only ever seen two, but rumors give consistent descriptions of three more. There're four men from the Mist, and one woman from the Leaf. Two of the men always work together; those're the ones I saw. Black hair, in their twenties, wear these heavy clawed gauntlets. The other two men are supposed together - I think one works for the other - but sometimes show up alone. One's a kid, black hair, long, wears a mask. Younger than you, older than your students. Other's a man, maybe thirty. Bandaged face, tall, carries a huge, cleaver-sword thing about as long as he is." He took a deep breath. "They're supposed to be dangerous - super ruthless - but the woman is worse. Short-to-average, super skinny, wierd colored hair, lots of scars, and eyes that don't match each other or look like anything human. If she's killed half the people she's supposed to've, in a quarter the ways, and if they're only an eighth as bad as they're supposed to be, then she's a super horrible blood-drinking monster worse than anything you ever saw in a history book or head in a legend."
"You believe it," the younger man said quietly.
"I had a friend that said he'd seen her - super reliable man, never told a lie in his life. He said every word of the rumors was true, and I've never once seem a man look so super scared." He gave his escort a sidelong glance. "You sure you can help?"
"My kids can do this," the other said firmly, repeating the statement softly under his breath as they came to the gate.
"My kids can do this."
As they came to a halt, Neshan nodded to himself and looked his students over. Sakura was standing on the balls of her feet with her fingers interlaced behind her, rocking back and forth slightly as they waited for Naruto. She was dressed much as she usually was these days - short, sleeveless burgandy dress with the Haruno clan crest on the back, tight, stretchy shorts underneath for modesty, sandals, and white linen bandages wound tightly around fingers, palms, wrists and forearms to provide an additional measure of bracing during punches and blocks. She had followed his example and braided her hair to keep it out of the way, and had let the loose plait tuck itself under her backpack as she glanced around with a happy smile. Alert, eager, ready. Good.
Sasuke had been the first to arrive, and had dropped his pack while he waited. He was sitting with his back against it, totally relaxed - but he was positioned for the best possible field of view, and his eyes never stopped moving. Conserving energy, but not taking his principal's safety for granted, even at the heart of friendly territory. Good.
*taptaptapTAPTAPTAPskssssshhhhhh*
"Hello, Naruto," he said mildly, with a slight lift of one eyebrow.
The Genin flinched, even as he bent over with his hands on his knees, panting. "Eheheh... Hinata-chan wanted to talk to me... and I'm not -that- late!"
"All right." He gave a quiet snort, then nodded slowly. "Tazuna-san, We're ready whenever you are."
* * * * *
A warm, sunny day was not the best circumstance under which to pay honors to one's deceased. Nevertheless, he kneeled before the simple monument at the edge of the field, and lay a single bluebonnet at its feet. The flower had been his brother's favorite.
"Ohayo, 'Niisan.
"My Genin team has been doing well since graduation. Anko-sensei has asked Kiba and I to try to support Hinata, by praising her successes and helping her find ways to avoid repeating her failures. Oddly, Kiba has had considerably more success at this than I; perhaps an artifact of dogs' social nature and the Inuzuka clan's association with them.
"Overall, I believe that our efforts are bearing fruit. While Hinata continues to stutter, and remains extremely shy and retiring, her ability to operate under pressure has been improving steadily, and she has slowly begun to begin to offer opinions and anecdotes of her own, rather than simply watching while Kiba and I converse.
"Anko-sensei's order that we attempt to teach the others our family taijutsu styles has been particularly effective. Aburame-ryuu's emphasis on avoiding hard impacts and body blows seems to adapt quite well against the Jyuuken's frequent repetition, but is less suited to defeating the Inuzuka clan's grappling techniques. Conversely, however, Kiba has found that placing oneself in any sort of close lock with a member of the Hyuuga clan is tantamount to suicide - while the formal Jyuuken only generates offense from the tenketsu of the fingers and hands, a few moment's concentration can do the same from any part of the body.
"While in the academy, I had always believed that Hinata's grades from our taijutsu instructors was a form of favoritism, brought on by her family's political influence. As the case actually turns out, this was unfair to both her, and our instructors. While she remains unacceptably tenative in actual sparring, I believe that everyone else on the team has been at least as surprised as I was by the level of insight and instructional ability she has shown in -all- forms of hand to hand combat, not just her own preferred Jyuuken style.
"Anko-sensei's comments on the causes and treatment of emotional abuse suggest that healing from it is essentially a matter of willpower - and the more I come to know Hinata, the less credible I find the idea of her ever failing in that respect." He sighed quietly, and settled back from kneeling into full seiza.
"Kiba has successfully mastered most of his clan's hereditary ninjutsu, but is unable to deploy them without the aid of soldier pills. Anko-sensei says that this will continue to be the case for at least the next few months, as the Inuzuka techniques are all B ranked by reason of chakra consumption. Nevertheless, she has had him performing a number of control and stamina exercises in an effort to decrease his reliance on what she calls 'unreliable crutches.'
"More generally, I have found that while my initial evaluation of him as being recklessly agressive and short-tempered is frequently accurate, it is by no means complete. His fearless and arrogant mannerisms cover a considerable degree of observational skill, perhaps even greater than my own. While I have never seen him fail to approach a task within his abilities with ostentatious confidence, he has also proven to have an extremely accurate idea of his own limits, and how they compare to his opponent's.
"For myself, I-" he broke off and looked towards the clearing's entrance as his kikai reported a familiar scent. "Ohaiyo, Kabuto-niisan."
"Ohaiyo, Shino-kun." There was silence for a moment as the older Genin knelt and made his own offering.
"Neshan-niisan is not here," Shino observed eventually - although, as usual, there was little to indicate what he thought about the fact.
"He's on a mission." No more than that was needed, not when all concerned, - speaker, spoken-to, spoken-of and departed - were shinobi, and subject to the same code and expectations. They understood about duty, and so did not need to speak further.
An early cicada rasped. Shino, whether prompted by the insect or some aspect of his own character, shifted slightly and asked, "When they... told us what had happened... everything came from Neshan's report. I realize that you probably do not wish to speak of it, but... it would be... comforting to have even a little clearer idea what happened."
Kabuto was quiet for a long moment, and the younger boy heard a reply in the silence, and so breathed a pained sigh and shifted, preparing to stand and go.
"The client had said that there would be no ninja."
Shino was confused for a moment, but then he understood and composed himself to listen.
"The target and the client were both major merchants, and the first owed the second quite a bit of money. We ha been retained to capture the target and obtain from him the location of sufficient properties and accounts to pay his debt - or as close to it as his means allowed.
"As far as we knew going in, the target was alone in his estate except for about two dozen guards and the night's paid entertainment. So, we used our standard formation for non-ninja targets - Neshan in front to draw their fire and attention, then me close behind to cover him, then your brother some distance back with his kikai spread as a warning net, and to allow him to direct us to targets we would otherwise have missed.
"There were twenty-five guards, as advertised, but they were expecting us. That night's courtesan was a Cloud kunoichi, and the rest of her team had infiltrated themselves among the guards.
"Standard procedure for an operation of the type that we -thought- we were facing is to secure the target first, then neutralize his protectors after it has been assured that he can no longer escape.
"When we entered the target's bedchamber, the Cloud-nin hit Neshan witha genjutsu that had him almost unconcious - I interrupted her before she could finish him, but I wasn't strong enough to defeat her quickly."
Shino became very still at what his kikai were smelling.
"I knew that her partners were attacking him - I could hear them fighting - but until Neshan recovered I could only hope he'd be able to hold out long enough."
"He couldn't," Shino said, voice thick.
"But he took both of them with him," Kabuto answered, with a kind of sad pride that Shino could only understand now that he was with his -own- Genin cell.
There was peace for a moment, and then the very birds in the trees went deathly silent with the tension as the younger asked the elder, "Why did you lie?"
Kikai exploded from their hive clusters deep in his body to race back and forth across the channels just beneath his skin, trying to be ready for the threat they felt. Despite the unsettling sensation, Shino held very still - he was quickly realizing just how unwise it would be for him to provoke the coldly calculating mind behind what had, until just a moment ago, been the calmest of eyes.
"Your destruction bugs smelled it."
"Yes."
And then Kabuto blinked, and was simply a kind, brotherly medic-nin once more. "Because many people would be hurt, if what I'm hiding gets out."
And the kikai smelled that it was the truth.
"If it were only me, I'd have done whatever it took to help him."
And that was also the truth.
"But, under the circumstances, I had - and have - a responsibility to my family... even if it risks my teammates."
Truth.
"And they knew and accepted that."
Truth.
That was all that Shino needed or wanted, but he also had a duty. "Is your secret a threat to Konoha?"
"Not if I have anything to say about it."
Truth.
Kabuto hesitated, then: "For what it's worth... I'm sorry."
"So am I."
It did not occur to Shino until much later - and much too late - that Kabuto had not actually said 'no.'
* * * * *
He didn't need the Byakugan to practice strikes, and so didn't see her coming out of the forest behind him. Nevertheless, she knew that the quiet sounds of her stride and the subtle feel of her chakra told him of her presence even before she spoke.
"Neji-niisan?"
"Hinata-sama." He turned to look at her, and his voice and face were calm - but an unspoken chill and the tension around the corners of his eyes set her heart sinking in her chest.
"I..." she paused, then plunged ahead. "The Hyuuga clan... -needs- to change. When, when we left the Lightning Country, the two-family system... stopped being neccessary. The longer we keep it, the more harm it does, pain it causes. I... I'll be the clan head, but... I won't be able to change things without at least one ally in the Branch family. If, if you want your children to be free of the Caged Bird seal, then... I know that you've... been hurt. I know that, that you probably hate me. I know you have a right to. But..."
He looked at her as she trailed off, and his face was very cold, indeed. "You know nothing. I don't know why you even feel the need to try, but -no- -one- can alter destiny's decrees, let alone someone with your fate of weakness and cowardice. The heavens have appointed the Hyuuga's fate of suffering and hatred, and neither of us can hope to alter it... any more than -you- could hope to defeat me." Something red-fanged and shadowy seemed to stalk in the echoes between his last words.
"You're wrong, Neji-niisan. People... -I-... -can- change. I will. I -have-." Her eyes narrowed slightly as she shifted her weight back and raised her hands into the first stance of the Jyuuken. "And I will prove it to you."
His face, somehow, grew even colder as he matched her readiness. "As a member of the Branch House of the Hyuuga, it is my duty to aid and educate the heir, and try to keep her from folly." She had known he would accept. There had been a chance, a hope, that he would be able to see shy, quiet Cousin Hinata rather than just another main house member - and at that moment and for years to come, she would always wonder if another set of words might have let him do so. But he hadn't, and so all he could think after her challenge was that here, at last, was a member of the hated 'them' who had murdered his father... and that she was within his reach.
Just as she knew, now if not at the beginning, that he could never heal unless he was shown exactly how he was wrong, exactly how free he was. "Just as it is my duty as Heir, to guide and protect those who have lost their way, and forgotten what it means to be family."
He flinched, and paled, enough to be noticable to normal eyes rather than just Byakugan. Then his lips pulled back in vicious snarl. "A CAGED BIRD HAS NO FAMILY!"
His rage nearly cost him the fight as she slipped outside of his leading right hand, and though he managed to avoid the strike that would have slammed across the side of his head and sent him out for the count with a five-day migrane - if he was lucky - the twist of his body and the momentum of his charge left him completely unable to avoid her outstretched leg. He tried to recover - twisted, failed, fell, crashing to the ground with all his weight and speed grinding his left arm across the ground. When he rose and spun towards her - just in time to block her kick - a seeping mass of blood was spreading over a patch of stripped skin and embedded dirt from wrist to elbow.
She backed off a step, then came in again, leading with her left arm. With his damaged like that, immobilizing his right arm would give her a serious advantage - and did, as the locked limbs twisted off to one side and let her naturally rotate her body in closer for a strike against...
The bleeding on his left arm was even more superficial than it looked, and that hand flashed in a long flurry of strikes that scattered pinpricks of fire across her entire right arm. Her palm strike still broke his nose, but the blue flare that would have marked a proper hit was completely absent.
She twisted the other arm around his and slapped her palm against his shoulder. He flinched, and recoiled, leaving them almost at arms' length. His attack had been typical Hyuuga work, precise and deceptively effective, sealing her tenketsu, the external opening points that let her vent chakra for the Jyuuken's strikes - or redistribute her body's energy to operate the limb's muscles. Her strike, on the other hand, had turned her greatest problem into a strength.
The Hyuuga's reputation and the effectiveness of their Gentle Fist taijutsu style concealed a serious weakness - the same genes that passed on the Byakugan were closely, perhaps inextricably linked with an unusually low natural chakra capacity. While the lesser flow made precise control easier, many Hyuuga Genin had to struggle to muster the power for more than a Bunshin or two, and only a rare handfull would ever improve enough to be able to perform more than a single Kaiten before collapsing in exhaustion. A large part of Neji's reputation as a genius was due to the fact that his chakra reserves were actually quite normal - a trait inherited from his mother.
Hinata was a sport, an individual in whom the collision of random, otherwise ordinary genes had produced an effect entirely different from the usual. Where other Hyuuga could direct their chakra with instinctive, casual precision, she struggled. Where they seethed, she grieved.
And where her kin husbanded the contents of a meagre pool of power, and even Neji worked from a simple mountain lake, she held back a sea fit to rival any genius of the Uchiha or Sarutobi.
That simple slap had delivered far more chakra than Neji's system was prepared to channel, and the effect was much like that of a lightning strike on an open power grid. His body would heal the damage eventually, in a few weeks alone or days with the right medical assistance, but in the meantime that shoulder would be useless, and likewise the arm beneath it.
His working arm struck, once, twice, three times before she blocked the fourth and grabbed his wrist as he pulled back. For a long, painful moment she felt her heart stop in her chest before fear kicked it back into operation and set it hammering against her ribs.
Then she jumped - bracing herself against his wrist and shoulder - and brought her knees up against her chest. His eyes widened.
She wasn't able to put very much chakra into the kick that sent him staggering back and threw her out and away in a long, low flip, but what she -could- do was enough to double him over, retching helplessly as she landed and looked up and across the small clearing at him.
"Neji-niisan... Why are you so angry with me?"
He coughed one last time and snarled at her. "Why? You have the nerve to ask? I thought you were different. I thought you were better than them. And instead, you play politics and power games, twisting everything you can reach." He planted one foot underneath himself and lunged upright, good arm leading. "You're just like the rest."
She flinched, fell back one step, two. "I-i-i... No! It's n-n-not-"
"SHUT UP!" he roared, lunging half the distance between them before pulling up and visibly forcing himself back to some semblance of control. "I don't see any more point to this. Hinata-sama."
"B-but-"
"If you're going to accept a fate as just another manipulative little bitch," he snarled, overriding her quiet words, "you'll need to do something about that stutter."
She flinched, but when he turned to go she managed to force a word out. "WAIT!" He stopped, but did not turn, so she walked around in front of him. "Not even the clan head can change the Hyuuga alone, Neji-niisan. I need your help to do what we both want to happen. And if you won't believe me... then I'll have to start by finding a way to convince you. I -am- telling the truth, whatever you're afraid of. All I ask is that you tell me how to prove it."
He snorted and stormed past her.
Once she felt his chakra signature leave her senses, Hinata collapsed down to her knees and looked up to the sky with a quiet, plaintive little wail. "I said... to -him-...?"
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Another draft of the Hina-Neji scene - by Valles - 07-06-2005, 01:19 AM
Ch 3, Scene 1! - by Valles - 07-06-2005, 07:51 AM
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I just realized... - by Valles - 07-19-2005, 06:05 AM
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TGNH - Chapter 1 - by Valles - 07-19-2005, 08:32 AM
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