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TGNH - Chapter 2
Re: I'm proud of this
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Sakura vs. Rin
Interesting choice on H!Sakura's part. How did she figure that part out though? And I'm surprised she didn't do the zombyizing-kunai-in-the-back thing Mr. Fantastic did during the Chunnin exams, but I guess she read Neshan wrong in thinking he'd be freaked out about it? On an unrelated note, about one in every three times I see H!Sakura, I have to remind myself it stands for Hell! Sakura, not Hentai! Sakura.
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Then they multiplied, sixty, one hundred twenty, two hundred forty, more. "kagekunai no jutsu," he murmured, and carefully failed to keep smiling when a tightly controlled whirling sphere of chakra knocked away that tiny fraction of the blades that would have actually hit their target.
I smell a plaaaaaannnn.

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Something was bothering her. Something she hadn't recognized, something she was missing... wait.
A slight flicker of chakra... Her eyes widened. "Oh." And if that was, then... her eyes darted around, cateloging the kunai he had scattered across the battlefield with that entirely to obvious leap. "Oh."
And there's the payoff.
Wow. Just wow. Absolutely brutal battle. Neshan readily demonstrates why he's one of the elite of the strongest of the Hidden villages, but H!Sakura has such scarry weird powers that demonstrate that she's a force of nature. The use of the Body Flicker was inspired. H!Sakura's flirtyness just undlerlines the fact that she'd cheerfully eat Nehsan's head. Brrrr. What'd you do to the our sweet (most of the time) pink haired kunoichi?
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"Tsukiyomi, and -you-. Fuck."
Oh shits.

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Seen in animation, Chidori looked stupid and obvious - simply running, clutching a ball of lightning. The difference between that and reality, he had a split second to think, not for the first time, was really nothing more than simple speed - speed that drove the eyes to tearing slits from wind force, speed that shifted the entire world around the attacker into a flashing blur - speed that could cover hundreds of feet literally in the blink of an eye.
I like the description here. You don't see many selfinserts where the fact that what they saw from the show wasn't a gain, much less as intimidating as somebody running at you full tilt holding a lightning bolt.
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"You'd have eaten Orochimaru alive. But I'm better than he is, and now you're mine."
Neshan noooooo!
Again, I'm really impressed byt this fight. Both sides are doing there level best to kill the other, with Neshan recieving the worst of it. I'm still holding out for some miraculous save, but you couldn't really ask for a better fight to go out in. You should be proud, you magnificent bastard.---------------
Leo: (July 23 - Aug 22)
You'll feel a lot better with warm clothes on your back and food in your stomach, proving that cannibalism has a couple things going for it.
---
Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
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TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-01-2005, 02:57 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by The Wanderer - 07-01-2005, 09:05 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-01-2005, 08:15 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by The Wanderer - 07-01-2005, 10:59 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Rieverre - 07-01-2005, 11:05 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by The Wanderer - 07-01-2005, 11:19 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-01-2005, 11:47 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-01-2005, 11:59 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-05-2005, 06:00 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Acyl - 07-05-2005, 05:44 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-05-2005, 06:27 PM
Another draft of the Hina-Neji scene - by Valles - 07-06-2005, 01:19 AM
Ch 3, Scene 1! - by Valles - 07-06-2005, 07:51 AM
Re: Ch 3, Scene 1! - by Star Ranger4 - 07-06-2005, 08:35 AM
Re: Ch 3, Scene 1! - by Valles - 07-06-2005, 08:43 AM
Re: Ch 3, Scene 1! - by Star Ranger4 - 07-07-2005, 06:29 PM
Chapter 3, Scene 5 - by Valles - 07-12-2005, 04:28 AM
Re: Chapter 3, Scene 5 - by ClassicDrogn - 07-12-2005, 10:28 PM
Re: Chapter 3, Scene 5 - by Angryoptimist - 07-13-2005, 06:37 AM
Re: Chapter 3, Scene 5 - by Valles - 07-13-2005, 06:48 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Herr Bad Moon - 07-18-2005, 04:06 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 07-18-2005, 05:17 AM
I just realized... - by Valles - 07-19-2005, 06:05 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by happerry - 07-19-2005, 07:57 AM
TGNH - Chapter 1 - by Valles - 07-19-2005, 08:32 AM
Re: I just realized... - by Herr Bad Moon - 07-19-2005, 11:18 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Bob Schroeck - 07-19-2005, 02:06 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by happerry - 07-19-2005, 07:00 PM
A -Wierd- Thought - by Valles - 07-20-2005, 10:01 AM
TGN(Co)H - by Acyl - 07-20-2005, 02:40 PM
The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-21-2005, 11:09 PM
The hell with it. - by Rieverre - 07-21-2005, 11:50 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 12:39 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Angryoptimist - 07-22-2005, 03:07 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 03:35 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Angryoptimist - 07-22-2005, 03:50 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 05:11 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by ClassicDrogn - 07-22-2005, 07:00 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 07:45 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Herr Bad Moon - 07-22-2005, 08:37 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 09:20 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Herr Bad Moon - 07-22-2005, 10:32 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by drakensis - 07-22-2005, 10:34 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Acyl - 07-22-2005, 05:52 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 06:33 PM
Geep! - by Foxboy - 07-22-2005, 08:13 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by ClassicDrogn - 07-22-2005, 09:26 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 10:43 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by ClassicDrogn - 07-22-2005, 10:58 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-22-2005, 11:46 PM
Re: The hell with it. - by ClassicDrogn - 07-23-2005, 01:28 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by Valles - 07-23-2005, 03:18 AM
Re: The hell with it. - by ClassicDrogn - 07-23-2005, 05:29 AM
music - by drakensis - 07-23-2005, 10:10 AM
Re: music - by Acyl - 07-23-2005, 04:50 PM
Re: music - by Valles - 07-23-2005, 05:26 PM
I'm proud of this - by Valles - 07-25-2005, 12:40 AM
sugoiiii - by Rieverre - 07-25-2005, 01:23 AM
Re: sugoiiii - by Valles - 07-25-2005, 01:41 AM
Re: I'm proud of this - by ClassicDrogn - 07-25-2005, 02:37 AM
Re: I'm proud of this - by Valles - 07-25-2005, 05:22 AM
Re: I'm proud of this - by Herr Bad Moon - 07-27-2005, 05:43 AM
Re: I'm proud of this - by Valles - 07-27-2005, 06:25 AM
Re: I'm proud of this - by Rieverre - 07-27-2005, 08:19 AM
Progress Report - by Valles - 08-01-2005, 03:00 AM
Re: Progress Report - by ClassicDrogn - 08-01-2005, 07:59 AM
Re: Progress Report - by Valles - 08-01-2005, 08:10 AM
Re: Progress Report - by Florin - 08-01-2005, 08:25 AM
Re: Progress Report - by ClassicDrogn - 08-01-2005, 08:43 AM
Why is it... - by Valles - 08-02-2005, 02:31 AM
Bored at Not-Really-Work - by Valles - 08-05-2005, 08:24 PM
Re: Bored at Not-Really-Work - by WengFook - 08-05-2005, 09:25 PM
Re: Bored at Not-Really-Work - by Valles - 08-06-2005, 05:52 AM
Re: Kyuubi - by drakensis - 08-06-2005, 10:01 AM
Re: Kyuubi - by ClassicDrogn - 08-13-2005, 09:21 PM
Re: Kyuubi - by Valles - 08-14-2005, 05:27 AM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by ClassicDrogn - 10-03-2005, 09:42 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by Valles - 10-03-2005, 10:00 PM
Re: TGNH - Chapter 2 - by ClassicDrogn - 10-04-2005, 07:04 PM

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