I actually missed that I typed the tongue bit twice, so thanks for catching that. (Blah, poor mind!)
To be -completely- fair to the setting, as it's a "Shinsengumi" story, I've had to do some things that are -terrible- tactically (Wait, what?
Shields for siege and melee vs. long-range missiles?) but are necessary to make sense in the story. Willing suspension of disbelief and all.
I actually do want to polish it a bit, though my primary reason for putting it up here is just practice at fiction. Chosen discipline ftl when it comes to
description!
To be -completely- fair to the setting, as it's a "Shinsengumi" story, I've had to do some things that are -terrible- tactically (Wait, what?
Shields for siege and melee vs. long-range missiles?) but are necessary to make sense in the story. Willing suspension of disbelief and all.
I actually do want to polish it a bit, though my primary reason for putting it up here is just practice at fiction. Chosen discipline ftl when it comes to
description!