Chapter 25, wherein Mana stretches her command of profanity, Asuka finally loses her shit, and Rei gets knocked the FUCK out.
When this is finished, I'm going to run through and edit the damn thing, then email it back to the author. Cracktastic, and horrrrrrrrible writing. I've seen DS turn out more readable prose.
"No can brain today. Want cheezeburger."
From NGE: Nobody Dies, by Gregg Landsman
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies
When this is finished, I'm going to run through and edit the damn thing, then email it back to the author. Cracktastic, and horrrrrrrrible writing. I've seen DS turn out more readable prose.
"No can brain today. Want cheezeburger."
From NGE: Nobody Dies, by Gregg Landsman
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies