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NGE: Nobody Dies
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03-24-2010, 12:09 AM
Quote:Sitting next to each other on the hospital bed, her knees up against her chest, his arm wrapped around her shoulders, they wait. She hasn't said anything since the admission. She waits for him to leave, to yell at her, to curse her but he doesn't. His hold on her becomes tighter, if anything.

"I don't know why it started," she says, her voice hoarse, squeaky, "I don't know why. I don't know why. I've been so bad, been so useless. I can't tell why I did it. I thought it would be like she wanted me to be, if I was burned like the Eva was supposed to burn me."

Closes her eyes, takes more deep, shaking breaths.

"She's been bad," she says, "We've been bad. I've been bad. I'm sorry. I'm s-sorry."

Rereading ND, and I come across this quote from Asuka...

And I realized, 'she' isn't Kyoko, but one of the other personas.

Well played, Mister Landsman. Well played.
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"V, did you do something foolish?"
"Yes, and it was glorious."
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