Just a little bit early [snippity thingy]

[paladindythe]

On the subject of the snippet, was it clear enough that it was the Jewel Seed was what was returning those error messages?

I thought it was the Tome of the Night Sky talking to itself, actually...

The blue text is supposed to be the Jewel Seed, acting to grant Hayate's wish for someone to help her by blocking the Defense Program's initial, unhelpful responses. I want it to be clear enough to the reader, but I also want it to seem natural enough that the Defense Program accepts the error messages as coming from itself. Any suggestions on how I could improve that?
Maybe if all the magical text was color coded, the disparity would br more obvious to the reader? But then I'd have a ton of rainbow text...

I think you'll need some narration there to guide the readers. I certainly missed it.