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Finishing Chapter Two
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Maybe you're facing a PoV problem? Whose PoV is most interesting in the context of the scene? Doug? Sailor Moon? Luna? Jadeite? Flau, the Youma? A random radio station technician? Does Tuxedo Mask show up? Does the fight go out live over the radio, and some other character hears things that way?

That last possibility - 'showing' the fight from the PoV of someone who isn't even there and only hears it on the radio in an Orson Welles 'War of the Worlds' manner - reminds me of an episode of Terminator: the Sarah Connor Chronicles, where they didn't have the time/budget to show a bunch of cops getting mauled by a Terminator, so they cut from the cops bursting into a motel room/apartment to a slow motion view from underwater in the nearby pool as dying cops get tossed in one after another. You can see it on youtube under 'TSCC FBI vs Cromartie Scene' if you're interested.----------------------------------------------------

"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
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Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 08-28-2017, 08:40 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 10-02-2017, 03:36 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by DeputyJones - 10-02-2017, 03:44 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 10-03-2017, 07:38 AM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 10-03-2017, 11:54 AM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by Shepherd - 08-29-2017, 06:27 AM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 08-29-2017, 02:29 PM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by robkelk - 08-29-2017, 02:40 PM
Re: Finishing Chapter Two - by Bob Schroeck - 08-29-2017, 03:02 PM
RE: Finishing Chapter Two - by robkelk - 10-03-2017, 07:57 AM

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