Quote:Pyeknu wrote:Mm. Read this all almost in one sitting, having never seen it before. The guy's not the best at the technical side of writing -- hell, kind of clumsy at it in places -- but I have to admit I enjoyed the story, mostly, even though it is an almost standard-issue Super!Harry vs. Manipulative!Dumbledore story. One interesting deviation from the usual though is the extent to which the author goes to make it clear that Harry's repenting friends are dreadfully sincere and all deserve a second chance -- right before Harry denies it to them. That's a delightful bit of sadism I've never seen executed quite that way before.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9157305/14/Losing-Control
Next chapter of Losing Control (Harry Potter).
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.