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Dead Bang
Typos and corrections
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"...gong rogue"
Oops...

I considered it, but the inference between the lines is that Linna already knew, since Reika had had a letter from Linna before the story started to the effect that the Chang Group was in a partnership with Loon. That was what brought Reika to Megatokyo, in fact, and was broadly hinted at in the prologue.
Still, I thought there would be little need for Sylia to bring that up. The opportunity to make more money in the business world should be all the lure Linna would need to jump at the chance. She's been demonstrated as a dance instructor who's keenly interested in the business executive model. I don't know. Maybe it's the dressier attire, or the intimation of power over others. Maybe it pays better. She's also money-hungry. (Maybe it's just a better way to meet guys? She goes through them fast enough.)
Anyway, thanks for the info. I'll make the changes today...
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Dead Bang - by Dragonflight - 03-17-2004, 09:39 PM
Re: Dead Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-17-2004, 09:50 PM
Re: Dead Bang - by Offsides - 03-18-2004, 12:31 AM
Re: Dead Bang - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-18-2004, 06:07 AM
Typos and corrections - by Dragonflight - 03-18-2004, 03:32 PM
Plain text format - by Dragonflight - 03-18-2004, 03:34 PM
Re: Plain text format - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-18-2004, 04:22 PM
Re: Typos and corrections - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-18-2004, 04:31 PM
Birthdays - by Dragonflight - 03-18-2004, 08:38 PM
Re: Birthdays - by Bob Schroeck - 03-18-2004, 09:43 PM
Re: Dead Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-18-2004, 09:44 PM
Re: Plain text format - by Bob Schroeck - 03-18-2004, 09:45 PM
Re: Birthdays - by Star Ranger4 - 03-19-2004, 12:01 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-19-2004, 02:55 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Bob Schroeck - 03-19-2004, 06:48 AM
Re: Birthdays - by cpt kangarooski - 03-19-2004, 09:03 AM
Nodes and overloads - by Dragonflight - 03-19-2004, 07:22 PM
Re: Nodes and overloads - by Bob Schroeck - 03-19-2004, 09:57 PM
Re: Nodes and overloads - by ClassicDrogn - 03-20-2004, 04:23 AM
Nodes and overloads - by Foxboy - 03-20-2004, 05:41 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-20-2004, 07:06 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-20-2004, 07:07 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Star Ranger4 - 03-21-2004, 02:53 AM
Uneventful Days - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-21-2004, 04:39 AM
Birthday blues - by Dragonflight - 03-22-2004, 09:13 PM
Dark writing - by Dragonflight - 03-22-2004, 09:17 PM
Re: Dark writing - by Bob Schroeck - 03-22-2004, 10:07 PM
Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Dragonflight - 03-24-2004, 10:22 AM
Improbability - by The StarWolf - 03-26-2004, 08:01 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-26-2004, 09:52 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by The Wanderer - 03-27-2004, 03:25 AM
Suppression - by The StarWolf - 03-27-2004, 07:27 AM
Re: Dark writing - by Moonsword - 03-28-2004, 01:06 AM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-29-2004, 04:53 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Disruptor - 04-02-2004, 05:13 AM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by The Wanderer - 04-02-2004, 10:12 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 04-03-2004, 03:34 AM

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