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Dead Bang
Jeanne Hedge
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Uneventful Days
#24
03-21-2004, 04:39 AM
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those don't make for good stories
We're talking about a simple birthday party. Unless I greatly misunderstood, a scene, not a story. For heaven's sake, even Bert VV managed to give the KS birthday parties where the excitement derived from food, drink and gifts, not behemoth blue B-series boomers blunderingly bombing and blasting away.
A little contrast is good for a story that's more than a few scenes long.Jeanne

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Dead Bang - by Dragonflight - 03-17-2004, 09:39 PM
Re: Dead Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-17-2004, 09:50 PM
Re: Dead Bang - by Offsides - 03-18-2004, 12:31 AM
Re: Dead Bang - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-18-2004, 06:07 AM
Typos and corrections - by Dragonflight - 03-18-2004, 03:32 PM
Plain text format - by Dragonflight - 03-18-2004, 03:34 PM
Re: Plain text format - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-18-2004, 04:22 PM
Re: Typos and corrections - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-18-2004, 04:31 PM
Birthdays - by Dragonflight - 03-18-2004, 08:38 PM
Re: Birthdays - by Bob Schroeck - 03-18-2004, 09:43 PM
Re: Dead Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-18-2004, 09:44 PM
Re: Plain text format - by Bob Schroeck - 03-18-2004, 09:45 PM
Re: Birthdays - by Star Ranger4 - 03-19-2004, 12:01 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-19-2004, 02:55 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Bob Schroeck - 03-19-2004, 06:48 AM
Re: Birthdays - by cpt kangarooski - 03-19-2004, 09:03 AM
Nodes and overloads - by Dragonflight - 03-19-2004, 07:22 PM
Re: Nodes and overloads - by Bob Schroeck - 03-19-2004, 09:57 PM
Re: Nodes and overloads - by ClassicDrogn - 03-20-2004, 04:23 AM
Nodes and overloads - by Foxboy - 03-20-2004, 05:41 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-20-2004, 07:06 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-20-2004, 07:07 AM
Re: Birthdays - by Star Ranger4 - 03-21-2004, 02:53 AM
Uneventful Days - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-21-2004, 04:39 AM
Birthday blues - by Dragonflight - 03-22-2004, 09:13 PM
Dark writing - by Dragonflight - 03-22-2004, 09:17 PM
Re: Dark writing - by Bob Schroeck - 03-22-2004, 10:07 PM
Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Dragonflight - 03-24-2004, 10:22 AM
Improbability - by The StarWolf - 03-26-2004, 08:01 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-26-2004, 09:52 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by The Wanderer - 03-27-2004, 03:25 AM
Suppression - by The StarWolf - 03-27-2004, 07:27 AM
Re: Dark writing - by Moonsword - 03-28-2004, 01:06 AM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 03-29-2004, 04:53 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Disruptor - 04-02-2004, 05:13 AM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by The Wanderer - 04-02-2004, 10:12 PM
Re: Chitty Chitty Bang-Bang - by Bob Schroeck - 04-03-2004, 03:34 AM

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