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Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted)
Re: Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted)
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Quote:If only she had something more subtle,
some kind of specially-trained "tiger team" that she could trust
both to handle jobs like this with competence and discretion...
As this stands, the "both" is dangling - both to do that, and what else? You need to either add a second referent, or drop the "both".
He has a point, but actually, the both only needs to move down to after the With, as in 'jobs like this with both competence and...""I was an Otaku before those kids came along and changed the meaning of the word."
-- HM "Howling Mad" Wilson to more than one team-mate.
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-

NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children
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Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted) - by The Wanderer - 03-13-2004, 04:43 AM
Re: Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted) - by Star Ranger4 - 03-13-2004, 06:25 AM
Re: Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted) - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-13-2004, 06:40 AM
Re: Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted) - by Jeanne Hedge - 03-13-2004, 08:31 AM
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