Chapter 15 errata (possible spoilers quoted)

[Jeanne Hedge]

If I may add one:

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"Tropical storm conditions are in evidence, with heavy cloud
cover, rain, lightning, and wind speeds in excess of 175 kmph."
Sylia, still in the co-pilot's seat, shook her head, still not
quite believing that she was seeing exactly what the announcement
had described: a monstrous black funnel cloud, silhouetted
against the fading February twilight.

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After Doug invoking Kon'ya wa Hurricane, after the emergency announcement of tropical storm conditions, I was really thrown to have the first eyes-on description be of a damn tornado! There's just too much of an association of "funnel cloud" = "tornado" for this midwesterner; it just seems wrong to see the former used in reference to anything but the latter.
And yes, I know this is addressed in the concordance. It's still jarring to me to read in chapter 15.

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Unless he was 'borged like those punks I met the day I arrived.

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Was Doug not paying attention when Kate froze both Quincy and the guard boomers with her override?

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I'd say that by now it's "out".

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Especially since it's already been released to locations other than this website ^_^Jeanne

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Jeanne Hedge
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