ahh, the schadenfreude is just dripping off this 
You did a good job conveying a sense of history between Seraph and Azuria.
however there were a few typos that dragged me out of the flow of the story:
You know I don't like that tiled
tiled -> title ?
the fall of Galaxy and the lose
lose -> loss
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy
You did a good job conveying a sense of history between Seraph and Azuria.
however there were a few typos that dragged me out of the flow of the story:
You know I don't like that tiled
tiled -> title ?
the fall of Galaxy and the lose
lose -> loss
-Terry
-----
"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy